Rosie had made a quick check of the unfamiliar garden before letting the children go out to
play. The bottom half of the garden was an overgrown mess, a muddle of trees and
shrubs. An ancient mulberry tree stood at the centre. Its massive twisted branches
drooped to the ground in places, its knuckles in the earth like a gigantic malformed hand.
The wintry sun hung low in the sky and the gnarled growth threw long twisted shadows
across the undergrowth within its cage. The trunk of the tree was snarled with the tangled
ivy that grew up through the broken bricks and chunks of cement, choking it. The path that
led down towards the fence at the bottom, which marked the garden off from an orchard
beyond, disappeared into a mass of nettles and brambles before it reached the padlocked
door.
How does the writer use language here to describe the garden?
You could include the writer's choice of:
• words and phrases
• language features and techniques
• sentence forms.
[8 marks]

Respuesta :

We can say the writer uses language to describe the garden in the following manner:

- The writer's word choice conveys a sense of mess and disorganization.

- Words such as "overgrown mess," "muddle of trees and shrubs," "gnarled growth," and "mass of nettles and brambles" help readers visualize the garden that has not been taken care of.

- The writer's word choice and use of figurative language also convey eeriness.

- Some of the figurative language used are imagery (language that appeals to the senses), personification (human-like behaviors or qualities attributed to inanimate objects), and metaphors or similes (comparison).

- For example, "its knuckles in the earth like a gigantic malformed hand" is a simile that compares the tree to a scary looking hand.

- "The trunk of the tree was snarled with the tangled ivy . . ., choking it" uses imagery and personification to help readers visualize the tree and the ivy that wraps it.

  • Figurative language consists in using words with meanings that go beyond their literal, original meaning.
  • Examples of figurative language are: metaphor, simile, hyperbole, personification, imagery, onomatopoeia, etc.
  • In the excerpt we are analyzing here, the writer uses metaphor, simile, personification, and imagery.
  • Metaphor and simile are both a type of comparison. The difference between them is that the simile needs the help of words such as "like" or "as", while the metaphor does not.
  • Personification happens when we give an objective a trait or behavior that belongs to humans.
  • Imagery happens when we choose words that appeal to the senses (sigh, hearing, smell, touch, and taste) to help readers visualize and feel what it is that we are describing.

Learn more about the topic here:

https://brainly.com/question/18453023?referrer=searchResults