Read the scenario, and answer the question.

Enrique interviewed for a copyeditor position six days ago. He decides to write a follow-up e-mail to ask how the decision process is going. He composes a first draft, but he knows that he will need to make some revisions.

To Whom It May Concern: My interview last week was enjoyable. Thank you. I am still interested in the job. In fact, I really, really need a job in the next week. I haven't heard anything from you or the human resources representative, and I am wondering what the holdup is. I'm very eager to know your decision, so if you could hurry things up, I would greatly appreciate it. I look forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely,
Enrique Heller

Choose one possible revision suggestion for the previous follow-up letter.

a. Include a statement informing the interviewer that you will call until you get an answer.
b. Include a date when he expects to hear from the prospective employer.
c. Identify the position he applied for and the date of the interview.

Respuesta :

Answer:

One possible revision suggestion for the previous follow-up letter is to:

c. Identify the position he applied for and the date of the interview.

Explanation:

Stating clearly the position that Enrique interviewed for and the the date of the interview will enable the interviewer to reconsider the candidacy of Enrique for the copy-editor position.  However, the wording of his first draft of the follow-up email sounds too condescending.  Enrique should not display some desperation in his job-search effort.