* This paragraph uses only simple sentences. See
if you can improve it by
turning some of the sentences into compound
and complex ones.
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One day Phil and Leon went to the canal. They were going fishing. There seemed
to be no-one else around. They chose the best place. They started to get out
the rods. Then there was a loud splash. Then there was a scream. Phil and
Leon looked up. They saw something moving in the water. Then they saw a
hand waving. Someone had fallen in the water.