This is for chorus. the assignment was to write a song abt someone wanting to give up and i need help finishing it up

Tell me whats the first thing that you see
Is it my smile, my eyes or lips or just my body
Or is it sheer determination
Or just the simple fact that im amazing
oh

What about the scars lying on my skin
What abt the hints tryin to tell you that im achin
Or the simple fact i hide my pain
Behind closed i try to cut my woes away

Are you truly listenin to me
Payin attention to all the signs that im throwing
Cause i cant do this on my own anymore
I think its time to close my eyes and shut the door